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Essay Body Paragraph #3

HW: RJ 10.3 Read for 20-30 min. 
Get RJ signed! Take a picture and send it to me. Weeks 9 and 10 please! 

Hey, y'all. We're almost done with our first week of online learning. How is it going for you so far? Do you like it? What could we do differently to make it easier? 

OK, you should be getting close to finishing your essays. This should be Body Paragraph #3 (for real and not a typo like yesterday). Some of the prompts don't really require a third body paragraph depending on how you organized your essay. Ok, remember to:
ü  use transitions to introduce reasoning and clarify relationships between ideas
ü  provide the strongest, most relevant, specific evidence through quotes and paraphrases (including page #s)
ü  elaborate on evidence to support reasoning, addresses/acknowledges opposing arguments
ü  connect reasoning to the thesis

Here are your sample essays to help guide you. 








Our Zoom today is at 1:00 pm. It's a great chance to see classmates or ask questions you might have about the work or about the crazy state of the world. 

You all are doing great so far. I'm proud of you :) Make sure you comment so I know you're here (on Remind or here, please!). 



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  1. AninaMarch 19, 2020 at 8:24 AM

    hi Anina here.

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  2. PaytonMarch 19, 2020 at 9:03 AM

    I’m here too

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  3. PaytonMarch 19, 2020 at 9:03 AM

    Also checking in for ray

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  4. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 9:04 AM

    i here

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  5. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 9:06 AM

    i'm here

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  6. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 9:17 AM

    Today I am not going to be mean to Payton and Isabella, because I'm too preoccupied with trying not to barf.
    (It's Natalia)

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    1. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 9:18 AM

      Oh, yeah, almost forgot, I'm still alive, in case anyone cared.
      (Again, It's Natalia

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    2. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 9:25 AM

      im late to talking to you again!!!!! NARD!

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    3. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 9:28 AM

      Hey, nard is my thing...
      But I'm glad I can talk to you, I miss you a lot...
      (It's Natalia)

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    4. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 9:52 AM

      i miss you so much~

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    5. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 10:02 AM

      I just said that...
      That's why I'm hoping we can go back to school, so I can see you.
      (It's Natalia)

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    6. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 10:05 AM

      Ew. Love.

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    7. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 10:10 AM

      SHUT UP, YOU SWEATY MOUNTAIN! YOU'RE JUST JEALOUS!
      (It's Natalia)

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    8. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 11:18 AM

      To be perfectly honest. I am confused why anyone is surprised. Am I the only one who saw this coming?

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    9. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 11:48 AM

      ShUt Up! DaNiEl!
      (It's Natalia)

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    10. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 12:07 PM

      OK.

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    11. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 12:59 PM

      It's like you want me to threaten you virtually...
      (It's Natalia)

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    12. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 1:28 PM

      OK.

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    13. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 1:46 PM

      I'll get you, and it'll look like a bloody accident...

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    14. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 1:50 PM

      OK.

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    15. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 2:28 PM

      Do YoU wAnT tO dIe?
      BeCaUsE i WiLl Be HaPpY tO hElP...

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    16. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 2:48 PM

      KO.

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    17. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 2:49 PM

      Ha I got around it.

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    18. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 3:07 PM

      No, no, not really.
      All you did was say "Knockout"

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    19. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 3:13 PM

      I was holding a uno reverse card.

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    20. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 3:14 PM

      Also I would like to point out how long this is. Really just scroll up.

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    21. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 3:15 PM

      Also where did you get "For all that is corn?"

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    22. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 5:08 PM

      It is not, "For all that is corn," It's "On all that is corn,"
      And I'm not sure, I just made it up one day.

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    23. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 5:19 PM

      Oh, I made small brain mistake.

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  7. SamMarch 19, 2020 at 9:20 AM

    I'm here

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  8. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 9:38 AM

    Hi everyone. hope your enjoying quarantine

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    1. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 9:39 AM

      Jessie, how could anyone enjoy this?
      (It's Natalia)

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  9. kayla :))March 19, 2020 at 9:48 AM

    Hi I'm here

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  10. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 10:04 AM

    Hi

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  11. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 10:21 AM

    Hi I’m here

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  12. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 10:23 AM

    Skylar is here

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  13. LivMarch 19, 2020 at 10:26 AM

    Hi I’m here

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  14. Brian RaymundoMarch 19, 2020 at 10:27 AM

    Brian’s here

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  15. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 10:28 AM

    I'm here. Good Morning :))

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  16. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 11:18 AM

    I'm hear. And I'm OK.

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  17. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 11:19 AM

    Its Jonathan

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  18. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 11:23 AM

    I'm here.

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  19. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 1:04 PM

    I'm here (Macy) <3

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  20. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 1:19 PM

    I like prompt number 1 5 and 3

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    1. Ms. NakadaMarch 20, 2020 at 9:13 AM

      Not sure who this is, but you can do prompt 1.

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  21. Madi TMarch 19, 2020 at 1:29 PM

    I'm here!

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  22. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 1:35 PM

    Ms. Nakada, is it okay if we upload our RJs on Schoology to you?
    (It's Natalia)

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  23. AnonymousMarch 19, 2020 at 1:58 PM

    David here

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  24. UnknownMarch 19, 2020 at 2:00 PM

    Hi it's Parker, I'm here.

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  25. Natalia :|March 19, 2020 at 5:16 PM

    I think I'm going to die from puking out my insides

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